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Wednesday, 26 July 2017

The Three Little Chickens Story

This is a Adventure Story, a Adventure story is when you write a Six sentence story.
Then you write another Adventure story but twisting with the 'Rising Action' 
Please enjoy watching this slide.


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6 comments:

  1. Anonymous3 August 2017 at 19:10

    You said that there was three chickens and there is four you should say that there is three chicks and one chicken.I really liked your story.I think you should add more to the story.
    Charlie rm8

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    1. Anonymous15 August 2017 at 19:50

      Thanks for the great comment! But I said 'little' chickens but otherwise awesome commenting! Reydon Room 11, Tui Hub

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  2. Anonymous3 August 2017 at 19:10

    Hi Reydon this is a really great story but... you should change 3 chikens to 4 chickens or 1 chicken and 3 chicks other than that this is a really great slideshow keep up the great work

    from Imogen room 8 Kea Hub

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  3. Anonymous13 August 2017 at 16:35

    Hi Reydon I agree with Charlie otherwise I really like your story.
    Tulasi from Rototuna primary

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  4. Anonymous20 August 2017 at 19:35

    thats a really cool story it should be still the 3 chicks and the one chicken ans one framer

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  5. Anonymous21 August 2017 at 23:42

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